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The Development Track

Introductory Prices

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Feature Length Screenplay Notes - Up to 130 pages (anything over will be more)
1 Hour Zoom Note Session - $250 - Each additional 30 mins is $50
3-4 pages of notes: $275
6 Pages of Notes $325
Rewrite - I’ll read an additional draft after the rewrite for $150. 2 pages of notes or 45 minute zoom. Must mark changes in draft to track changes.
TV Pilot Notes
1 Hour Zoom Note Session - $220 - Each additional 30 mins is $50
3-4 pages of notes: $245
6 pages of notes: $300
Rewrite - I’ll read an additional draft after rewrite for $125. 2 pages of notes or 45 minute zoom. Must mark changes in draft to track changes.
Pitches (Film or TV) - 30 minute max for TV, 40 minute max for Feature + time for notes
Will listen to a pitch and provide feedback - $200
Written notes - Additional 100$ ( must send pitch pages after listening)
Read pitch pages and 2-3 pages of notes - $225
THE DEVELOPMENT TRACK

THE DEVELOPMENT TRACK – $800 –

Take a project through full development cycle. This mimics what a real life development process is like at a studio or network.

This is my premium service and highly recommended.

Includes all of the below. Can’t skip steps. (This will be on writer’s timetable. Up to a year to go through all steps).

45 Intro Zoom - Pitch me up to 4 ideas and I will tell you the one that sounds most exciting
Story Arena - Send 5 page summary of project - Will give notes over Zoom
Outline - 10-15 pages - Will give notes over zoom
Draft One - Will give notes over Zoom or send notes document
Draft Two - Will give notes over Zoom or send notes document
Outline Notes
Under 5 pages, 2-3 pages of notes: $125
5-10 pages, 2-3 pages of notes: $140
Logline
Feedback and one rewrite from me: $20
Feedback and 3 alternatives: $45

Why choose Me?

You will get honest creative feedback from a Hollywood executive with 20 years of experience
You will know how to improve your script to get to the next level
You will get a smart analysis on entertainment industry trends and what streaming services and networks are looking for.

*Fees must be paid upfront via Venmo, Zelle or PayPal

Email me directly:
TheDevelopmentTrack@gmail.com